Saturday, August 16, 2008

trust you

i feel something which i last feel
i feel something which scary
i feel so scary
i feel much something that was happened
i feel confused
i feel it's not fair
i feel it's so hard
it's so complicated life
i feel i wrong to take one decision
i feel i must in beside you
because
i feel so lonely
i feel lonely again
i feel something which biggest that lost in mine
although
i sure it's still same like yesterday
i feel that you feel
i do that you do
i cry to see this
but
i trust you ..

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

One good start for poetry...
And you express yourself pretty well in this..
I like the ending...

Keep writing and be tough!

rodra

greatnizar said...

to rodra...
thx bro . i just expel inside of my heart . but i sure i love him so i trust him .

PritaNur said...

that is so very sweet sist!
=]

btw,blog kamu aku link.

greatnizar said...

to prita...
thx sist . yah , that's truth . he ..
:)

okok . cuip !

Marly said...

So sweet..
Who is the lucky guy?

greatnizar said...

to marly..
thanks yaa..
exactly,,he's my soul..

who are you marly?